SwiftStriker00's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Santa's Stacking Filler]

good game

graphics and sound were good, and great idea, but WAY too much advertising to the point were i was quit cause i didnt want to so them anymore. I honestly think you took alot of potential away from the game. Last point while the stacking physics were good, sometimes the next box would fall just to far away to get there in time w/o having your stack fall over

[NarutoCreate A Character4]

Very good

Very good dress up looks like you had lots of options for mixxing and matching from the characters. Content wise it was packed, minus the fact that some secitons only had very few options (try making your own ideas if u need more). one feature I would want to see, is some kind of save funtion, even if its just a print screen, so you can show your character off to friends. Where you lost the 1/10 point was the touchy re-layer system. Great idea putting it in, but it needs fixes. For example, the pants were on the bottom and upon moving the pants up, it would mess up the relationship between head and shirt.

Knight-Of-Nights responds:

Yes, I'll have to learn how to make it easier. Thanks.

[Bright in the screenCHAOS]

good show!

pretty decent game. though its a bitch glitchly. For example, i jumped on to a platform, and clicked it at a same time which caused me to fall through the world.

[Mario Sonic Scene Creator]

cool

not too much you can do with it, but it was good for making a scene or two. Its not really hard to make a preloader (i have a tut uploaded) . Also you might want to look at your focus and MouseDown, and MouseUp listeners, a few pieces get "stuck" to the mouse. Not bad

Slayerdude111 responds:

Yea Im Fixing It Up...

[Flash DS]

so heres what ya need

Ok, thats a good start, but there is a lot of room for improvement, especially for your platformer. Everything from hit detection, gravity, goal, and death are important aspects to a game, not mention functionality. You have succeeded in some parts partially, but I suggest you look up tuts online or buy a book( i have 2 good ones, pm if you want and i'll tell you) to help fine tune the game. Secondly don't draw w/ the mouse, if you don't have a graphics tablet, draw w/ the line tool. it will make everything look better. 2/5, 4/10 for room for improvement

[Death Row]

quite addicting

two bugs that caught my attention and continual annoyed me was, one that he would got to sleep standing up and sometimes walking, but eyes closed. But most importantly, the chat breaks if you hit the Enter key, often getting "Undefined" repsonses and 0 to mood after you close the box. Other than that it was a very well laid out game, even though i could never get his work ethic to go up

[ASAHK.]

ehh

I fell through the ground and ran around below the level, might want to put a catch there. Combat was kinda boring, one attack the only hard part was if you got flanked, you were pretty much done, unless you could jump out. Though, the special was pretty good

[TheExtreme Stick Tutorial]

Well don

What a great simple tut. My hair making abilitys are truly better after viewing that. GJ!